How to Write a Press Release

How to Write a Press Release That Gets Published (With Annotated Structure) | Business Magnates
The Writing Guide

How to Write a Press Release That Gets Published

Written by a team that writes and distributes releases professionally, this is the full craft: the inverted pyramid, the headline that reads like news instead of an advertisement, the quote that sounds like a person, and the formatting news platforms expect, annotated line by line on a real structure you can follow tonight.

Annotated structure included By the team behind 1,800+ verified entrepreneurs Updated July 2026
The One Principle

Write It Upside Down: The Inverted Pyramid

Every editor, journalist, and news platform reads the same way: top first, and only as far as the page earns. The inverted pyramid puts the entire story in the first sentence, the essential context in the next two paragraphs, and the nice to know material at the bottom where it can be cut without losing the news. The Nielsen Norman Group’s research on the inverted pyramid confirms what newsrooms have practiced for a century: readers decide in seconds, so the news cannot wait.

This is the opposite of how founders naturally write. You want to build up to the big reveal. A release that builds up gets deleted before the reveal arrives. Put the announcement first, prove it second, decorate it never. If you would rather see this structure than read about it, the annotated release below is the whole lesson on one page, and our press release examples page shows the format in full.

The Business Magnates Standard

Every Part of a Publishable Release, Annotated

The document below is the structure we use when writing recognition releases. The numbered pins map to the legend beside it. Follow the order exactly, because the order is the method.

For Immediate Release

1[Company] Founder Earns Independent Entrepreneur Verification, Joins International Registry

2Recognition follows an independent review of business activity, professional standing, and documented entrepreneurial contribution.

3CITY, Month Day, 2026 [Founder name], founder of [Company], has been independently verified and officially recognized by Business Magnates, earning a permanent listing in the International Entrepreneur Registry.

4The verification followed an individual human review of [Company]’s operating history, public professional presence, and supporting documentation against published criteria. The recognition is permanent and publicly checkable in the registry.

5“Clients kept asking how they could know we were the real thing,” said [Founder name]. “Now there is an answer that does not require taking my word for it.”

6Founded in [year], [Company] serves [market] across [region], and [one concrete, checkable fact: locations, customers served, years operating].

7About Business Magnates: Business Magnates is an independent entrepreneur verification and recognition platform. Every verified entrepreneur is listed in the publicly searchable International Entrepreneur Registry. Media contact: [name, email].

1

The headline reads like news

One announcement, one active verb, under 80 characters, zero superlatives. Test it: could this sentence appear above a news story without embarrassment? “Revolutionary visionary disrupts industry” fails. “Founder earns independent verification” passes.

2

The subheadline adds the second fact

Not a repeat of the headline with adjectives. It carries the next most important fact, usually the how or the why, in one italic line.

3

The dateline and lede carry the whole story

City, date, then who, what, and why it matters in roughly 35 words. A reader who stops here should still know the entire news. Most releases die in this sentence, so write it last and write it ten times.

4

The context paragraph proves it

How it happened and, critically, where a stranger can check it. A release whose central claim is independently verifiable reads differently from one that merely says so, and editors feel that difference immediately.

5

The quote sounds like a person

Its job is meaning, not volume. Cut every quote that says “thrilled and honored,” keep the one that says something only the founder could say. Read it aloud; if you would never say it, neither would you.

6

The detail paragraph earns belief

One or two concrete facts with numbers: years operating, customers served, markets covered. Specificity convinces where adjectives beg.

7

The boilerplate and contact close the file

A two sentence description of the organization and a reachable human. Journalists work on deadline, and an unreachable contact is a skipped story.

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The House Rules

Formatting That Newsrooms Expect, Nothing Extra

News platforms and journalists broadly follow AP style conventions, and your release should read as if it belongs in that world. The rules that matter most:

Do

  • Keep it near 400 words, one page. Major wire base rates bill overages beyond roughly that length, which tells you what the industry considers standard. See the full pricing breakdown.
  • Write in third person throughout, including about yourself.
  • Use active verbs: earns, launches, opens, joins, expands.
  • Include at least one fact a stranger can verify without emailing you.
  • Date it, place it, and end with a reachable contact.
  • End the release with ### or -30-, the traditional end mark editors look for.

Do Not

  • Use exclamation marks. Anywhere. One exclamation mark reclassifies the whole document as an advertisement.
  • Stack adjectives: leading, innovative, revolutionary, world class. Every one of them subtracts credibility.
  • Bury the announcement in paragraph three behind company history.
  • Write a quote that repeats the lede with feelings added.
  • Send attachments. The release lives in the body of the email or the distribution form.
  • Announce nothing. A release about general excellence is spam with a dateline.
Where Releases Die

The Five Mistakes That Kill Good Announcements

01

Burying the news

The announcement appears in paragraph three, after the founding story. Editors never reach paragraph three of a release that has not earned it. The news goes first, always.

02

Announcing an opinion

“Company X is redefining excellence” is not an event. Publishable releases announce things that happened: a launch, an expansion, a milestone, a recognition earned.

03

The interchangeable quote

“We are thrilled and honored” could come from any human at any company about anything. If the quote survives being moved to a different press release, it was never a quote.

04

Nothing checkable

Every claim in the release rests on the sender’s word. A journalist doing thirty seconds of diligence finds nothing, so the story costs too much to trust and gets skipped, silently.

05

Written, never distributed

A perfect release sitting in your drafts folder reaches no one. Distribution is its own discipline with its own market and prices, and how it reaches Google News is a separate question with exactly three answers.

The Missing Ingredient

A Perfect Release About Nothing Checkable Still Goes Nowhere

Here is what this guide cannot teach you, because no writing guide can. The releases that get published, indexed, and read share one property that has nothing to do with formatting: they announce something true that a stranger can confirm. Structure gets you read. Verifiability gets you believed. You can only write your way to the first one.

That is the quiet reason the founders who get published first tend to be the ones who get verified first. An independently confirmed recognition is a real event, checkable in the public registry, which makes it exactly the kind of announcement this whole guide is built around. It is also why the Registration + Press Release package exists: verification creates the milestone, our team writes the release in the structure above and publishes it as the official announcement of your recognition, and it goes out through global news distribution networks, indexed and permanent.

What every unpublished week quietly costs

While the draft waits for a milestone worth announcing, your name is being searched by prospects, partners, and journalists, and it is answering with silence. The founders being found this week are not better writers than you. They had something verified to announce, and they announced it.

The application takes about 5 minutes, the review takes 4 to 7 business days, and if verification does not approve you, every dollar comes back. The writing you just learned makes you a sharper judge of the release we write about you.

Done For You

Or Skip the Blank Page Entirely

Everything on this page is yours to use, and for a genuine milestone plus patience, the do it yourself route works. If you would rather have the milestone, the writing, and the distribution handled in one motion, the $499 package is the whole sequence: independent verification, a release written by our team in exactly this structure and published as the official announcement of your recognition, distribution through global news networks, and indexing on Google News and search engines.

It also includes everything in the $199 Featured Article tier: the published feature, your International Entrepreneur ID, certificate, permanent registry listing, and verified profile. One payment, nothing to renew.

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  • Release written by us in this exact structure, published as the official announcement
  • Distributed through global news networks, indexed by Google News and search engines
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FAQ

Press Release Writing Questions Answered

Around 400 words, and never more than a page. That is not an arbitrary preference: major wire services price their base rates around roughly 400 words and bill overages beyond it, which tells you what the industry treats as standard. If your draft runs long, the inverted pyramid tells you exactly what to cut: whatever is at the bottom.
Something happened, it is specific, and a stranger can confirm it. Launches, expansions, funding, milestones with numbers, and independently earned recognitions all qualify. General excellence, passion, and commitment to quality do not, because nothing occurred. If you are short a milestone, an independent verification is a real, checkable event, and it is the one on this list you can schedule. Launching something new? The launch moment has its own playbook in how to announce a new business.
Yes. Budget distribution starts around $29 and major wires run $350 to $805 and up before add ons, with writing extra almost everywhere; the full price breakdown maps the whole market. What no wire fee changes is the announcement problem: they distribute what you wrote, and the claims remain self reported. The $499 package differs in sequence, not just price: verification first, so the release has something checkable to announce.
No, and nobody honest will promise otherwise. Formatting gets you past the first three seconds of an editor’s attention, and distribution through indexed networks makes the release publicly findable, including in Google News surfaces. Whether a journalist writes a follow up story is an editorial decision no one can sell you, though the media coverage playbook teaches the honest way to earn it. What you control is the structure, the checkability of the claims, and whether the release exists at all.
Our team does, using the exact structure taught on this page, drawn from your application, story, and submitted materials. Business Magnates publishes it as its own official announcement of your verified recognition, which is precisely what gives it independence a self written release cannot have: the recognition body is doing the announcing, not the recognized.
The press release examples page walks through complete annotated releases in the format we distribute, showing what the headline does, why the first paragraph carries the story, and where the verification reference gives the piece its weight.

You Now Know How to Write It. The Question Is What It Announces

Structure is learnable, and you just learned it. The checkable milestone is the part you cannot write into existence, and it is one application away, with a full refund if verification does not approve you.

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